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Coming back soon... to be published within the HOAX #22 issue of antiTHESIS, a Melbourne University publication. x
For my boyfriend, who just happens to be the most amazing person I know. One morning I couldn't move because I was in so much pain and he made me feel a little less hopeless and a whole lot more loved. And that's ^ how it went.
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Ghost Armor by `Amberlouie is a dark, poignant tribute to a lover in hard times. ( Suggested by zebrazebrazebra and Featured by Halatia )
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8Happiness Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011

`Gouge my chest,
separate the heart,
wrenching all the vessels.
Examine it,
a Broken Soul.
You left me harrowing alone.`

Sorry, but reading your poem made me write that sort of, I like it, the beautiful pain inside this poem and how you managed to draft your emotion in words, amazing. <3
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Amberlouie Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Great that you wrote a poem response, thank you x
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8Happiness Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
(:
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Alhadis Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Beautifully written. :) Only criticism would be that you misspelt "armour". But other than that, it's nice. :D
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Amberlouie Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Professional Writer
I think you can spell it either way, I would usually spell it armour but then I got confused :] Thanks for the comment.
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Alhadis Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome. ^_^

(Erm, "Armor" is the American spelling... "Armour" is the Traditional/English/Australian/"Rest-of-the-worldian" spelling. Thanks to American spellcheckers, it's getting easier and easier to get confused. :confused: )
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Amberlouie Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Professional Writer
'Armo[u]r' is just one of those words that really confuses me, which is stupid because us Australian's have the 'u' in everything, like 'arbour' or 'behaviour'. I'm going to put it down to being CFS-fucked in the brain, forgive me? :P
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Alhadis Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
No, we were always using the U's. :) It's just Americans that insisted on cutting them out because Noah Webster reckoned it'd "make more sense".

Just install the Aussie spellcheck for your browser if you're not certain. ;)
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Amberlouie Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Professional Writer
I just said that ''Armo[u]r' is just one of those words that really confuses me, which is stupid because us Australian's have the 'u' in everything, like 'arbour' or 'behaviour'.' Not that there was never 'u' in anything :] I think you've misunderstood that sentence. I do have an Aussie spellchecker but I don't write in word, I write in notepad. Nevertheless, thanks for the pick up. x
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Alhadis Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome. ;) Hey, I was once a writer too.

Just didn't want such a beautiful prose soiled by typos, hehe. :) Quite a talent you've got.
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